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Post by 300ilikepie on 04/06/10, 06:44 am

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Re: my best animation

Post by 300ilikepie on 04/06/10, 06:46 am

dramatic animation angles in the beginning :D
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Re: my best animation

Post by ug5151 on 04/06/10, 07:32 am

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Re: my best animation

Post by R12 on 04/06/10, 08:26 am

It could use alot more easing and smoothness. The cameram movements were too jumpy. And not much at all happens.

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Re: my best animation

Post by sage on 04/06/10, 08:29 am

the jump needs major improvement. he nearly stops in midair. and as rock said, the ground is very shaky. smooth it out. the head is also shaky.


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Post by PajamaEntertainment on 04/06/10, 09:18 am

i see what you were trying to do with the fround in fact i love it when ppl do that with the ground but you need to work on it, it was really rough also the jump didnt look very realistic
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Post by FireMarioX on 04/06/10, 10:19 am

Ok. First problem. He stops in midair while he jumps. XD Second, the camera shaking was a little too jumpy and a little too quick moving. You can solve that just by easing with the shaking. Third, when he is about to land, his head shakes like a headbanger or something. Try to make it less shaky. It looks wierd. No offence. I used to do it too. XD But you still are improving very much! :D
Try to work on foot placement too because when he took his first step in the animation, it slid a little. XD
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Re: my best animation

Post by 300ilikepie on 04/06/10, 12:48 pm

I like doing those dramatic scenes where the camera moves with the person in the middle, I tried but got too lazy XD and when he jumped I think I eased too much.
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Re: my best animation

Post by sage on 04/06/10, 01:34 pm

300ilikepie wrote:I like doing those dramatic scenes where the camera moves with the person in the middle
what you're talking about is called center of origin.


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Re: my best animation

Post by TheCluelessXbox on 16/06/10, 02:17 pm

I think you slowed him down to much mid-air.But nice camera angleing.
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