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Post by XPivotN00bX on 25/06/10, 07:21 am



This is just a thing I made in 3hours or so... please tell me what I can improve on. Big Smile
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Post by MrPtrk19 on 25/06/10, 09:29 am

nice i say med interz
get the piv file the GIF is a little laggy
there isn't much to say other than great job

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Post by XPivotN00bX on 25/06/10, 09:57 am

MrPtrk19 wrote:nice i say med interz
get the piv file the GIF is a little laggy
there isn't much to say other than great job

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Alright I will make a .piv file for my next one thank you for the comment
although I don't think I'm that high haha lol!
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Post by Xyphien on 25/06/10, 10:47 am

High/med beginner, some parts were stiff.


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Post by sage on 25/06/10, 11:04 am

yeah, there were stiff parts and parts that need more easing.

i love the camera angles :D

i agree with the rank pivetor said


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Post by XPivotN00bX on 25/06/10, 11:14 am

Agreed
Thank you for the help! Boing
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Post by PajamaEntertainment on 25/06/10, 12:51 pm

I say your high beg though some parts were med beg due to stiffness, however i love how cinematic you made it as you improve your videos will be incredible due to how cinematic they are i look forward to seing stuff from you in the future
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Post by FireMarioX on 26/06/10, 12:42 am

I agree with PajamaEntertainment and Sage. Lol. As always.
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Post by XPivotN00bX on 27/06/10, 10:51 am

PajamaEntertainment wrote:I say your high beg though some parts were med beg due to stiffness, however i love how cinematic you made it as you improve your videos will be incredible due to how cinematic they are i look forward to seing stuff from you in the future
Thank you. What parts are stiff? Its hard to critique my own stuff.
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Post by hazza on 27/06/10, 11:17 am

all of it expect the part when he is falling.

try moving every joint in every frame with reducing shakeyness as much as you can xD

pajama and sage have said alot of what i was going to say xD
but if you want to proceed to intermediate, you need to learn how to flow your animations xD

but nice camera angles, and good story plot, scenery and effects xD


med-high beginner..

its also shakey..



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Post by Pivotnam on 28/06/10, 12:28 am

You should have a gravity bounce when someone gets punched, kick, ect.
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