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What rank am I again
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Re: What rank am I again
low beginner..
thats all i have to say...
lol, jk. can you imagine if i was like that.
cool way of animating but it lacked the basics ( easing, feetplacement, stiffness, shakeyness )
work on those please and you will improve xD
thats all i have to say...
lol, jk. can you imagine if i was like that.
cool way of animating but it lacked the basics ( easing, feetplacement, stiffness, shakeyness )
work on those please and you will improve xD
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Re: What rank am I again
hazza wrote:low beginner..
thats all i have to say...
lol, jk. can you imagine if i was like that.
cool way of animating but it lacked the basics ( easing, feetplacement, stiffness, shakeyness )
work on those please and you will improve xD
when i work on them it doesn't help
and i think my feet placement is just fine
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Re: What rank am I again
It does help if you work on them. Low beginner. Try to ease more.
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Re: What rank am I again
You have once again, improved. XD
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Re: What rank am I again
well, yes u have improved but still, you can improve more :P
you gotta ease, when he kicks his leg should of eased a bit more whilst going up.
you eased the jump, which i liked xD
but when he landed he had no reaction to the landing. he should of bended down a bit because when you jump you don't land and your legs stay still. they bend down a bit.
also the animation was stiff, you gotta move every joint in every frame while adding flow and keeping the shakeyness down xD
as you said " i think my feet placement is just fine " it was until he fell into that hole thingy. his back foot slid and shook a lot. it should of either stayed there or lifted up and moved back.
it was pretty shakey when he fell in the hole. but it was god how his body bounced a bit and it was eased there. but it still was shakey.
and you see, all that was just the basics. so the basics are good cc,
oh and low beginner
you gotta ease, when he kicks his leg should of eased a bit more whilst going up.
you eased the jump, which i liked xD
but when he landed he had no reaction to the landing. he should of bended down a bit because when you jump you don't land and your legs stay still. they bend down a bit.
also the animation was stiff, you gotta move every joint in every frame while adding flow and keeping the shakeyness down xD
as you said " i think my feet placement is just fine " it was until he fell into that hole thingy. his back foot slid and shook a lot. it should of either stayed there or lifted up and moved back.
it was pretty shakey when he fell in the hole. but it was god how his body bounced a bit and it was eased there. but it still was shakey.
and you see, all that was just the basics. so the basics are good cc,
oh and low beginner
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Re: What rank am I again
I don't know what to say because it is very choppy but his back is definitely being eased... good job!
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Re: What rank am I again
The gif slowed down for some unknown reasonXPivotN00bX wrote:I don't know what to say because it is very choppy but his back is definitely being eased... good job!
Re: What rank am I again
No worries its only cause one of your frames is a little of... it happens to everyone once in a while haha >.<
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Re: What rank am I again
i think you just focused on the back, cuz the arms ( no offence ) are just so shakey...
tho with the back at the start is seems you over eased. so it goes like this..
|-|-|-|--|---|--|-|-|-|-|
cuz it seemed a bit to slow, but when it came back it went
|----|------|---|--|-|-|-|
which is alright tho you gotta ease when he takes off...
but the arms are just shaking all over the place... try making them more, controlled :P
also try moving the upper back a bit more xD
low beginner...
E: sorry i just saw that u said the gif screwed it up, is that why the back goes really slow then fast?
( thats why i only striked waht i said, you can still read it but if its cuz of the gif then dont pay attention :P
|-|-|-|--|---|--|-|-|-|-|
cuz it seemed a bit to slow, but when it came back it went
|----|------|---|--|-|-|-|
which is alright tho you gotta ease when he takes off...
but the arms are just shaking all over the place... try making them more, controlled :P
also try moving the upper back a bit more xD
low beginner...
E: sorry i just saw that u said the gif screwed it up, is that why the back goes really slow then fast?
( thats why i only striked waht i said, you can still read it but if its cuz of the gif then dont pay attention :P
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Re: What rank am I again
Sorry but this is stiff, choppy, and there isn't much easing if any...
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Re: What rank am I again
Needs more easing.
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Re: What rank am I again
when the black stick is getting punched you could try to move his head a little thats my opinion
Re: What rank am I again
Yeah his head is stiff but its mainly easing...
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i agree
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Re: What rank am I again
I don't know if this is true but i think I heard that there are 2 types of easing:
the first one is
|-|--|---|----|---|--|-|
And one is just the end bit
|------|-----|----|---|--|-|
I would use the second one if it is an actual easing lol but I use it...so maybe?
the diagram makes sense if you saw hazza's easing tutorial
the first one is
|-|--|---|----|---|--|-|
And one is just the end bit
|------|-----|----|---|--|-|
I would use the second one if it is an actual easing lol but I use it...so maybe?
the diagram makes sense if you saw hazza's easing tutorial
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Re: What rank am I again
actually the second one is called heavy spacing where you ease a bit at the beggining and alot at the endXPivotN00bX wrote:I don't know if this is true but i think I heard that there are 2 types of easing:
the first one is
|-|--|---|----|---|--|-|
And one is just the end bit
|------|-----|----|---|--|-|
I would use the second one if it is an actual easing lol but I use it...so maybe?
the diagram makes sense if you saw hazza's easing tutorial
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