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Rank my third animation

Post by Choiceinator on 05/07/10, 02:12 am

This is my third animation I ever made since joining pivot I know its not that good but its way better than my first. Plz rank and give me tips on how to mkae it better Its not done yet so just rank whats done
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Re: Rank my third animation

Post by FireMarioX on 05/07/10, 02:45 am

Ok. Low beginner. Try to ease more and work on stiffness, foot placement, and flow. Plus, it kinda looks like one of their knees' joints are bent backward when they transform. That's something you could work on too. XD
But it still is a good third animation. :)
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Post by XPivotN00bX on 05/07/10, 03:37 am

I agree with FireMarioX but I think the foot placement is pretty good/descent and it is very choppy. Major problems are Stiffness, Choppiness, and Easing. Very creative though Big Smile
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