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    Post by arcangel372 on 10/07/10, 06:17 pm

    this is my very first pivot ever please rnak me and tell me how to improove
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    Post by PajamaEntertainment on 10/07/10, 10:47 pm

    not bad for a first its low beg its very stiff move all joints in all frames his feet are sliding all over so work on foot placement and theres no easing its also shaky


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    Post by FireMarioX on 11/07/10, 01:11 am

    I agree with PajamaEntertainment, of course. :P
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    Post by Xyphien on 11/07/10, 02:55 am

    Hopefully Hazza will post his cc here =D

    But pajama nailed it on this one. (Just not as detailed as Hazza XD)


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    Post by PajamaEntertainment on 11/07/10, 05:04 am

    lol i dont think any one can be as detailed as hazza


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    Post by arcangel372 on 11/07/10, 07:18 am

    i made another
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    Post by PajamaEntertainment on 11/07/10, 07:20 am

    same problems as b4


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    Post by JusticeThePKMNLover on 11/07/10, 07:35 am

    Off Topic : Is it just me or is that the Hirudegan from the massive Dbz pack?
    On Topic : Pajama is always right. Lol.
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    Post by Pivotnam on 11/07/10, 09:58 am

    JusticeThePKMNLover wrote:Off Topic : Is it just me or is that the Hirudegan from the massive Dbz pack?
    yes it its


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    Post by hazza on 11/07/10, 01:37 pm

    lol, well its easy giving cc to people who are new to pivot because they all suffer from the same things. it gets more detailed the better you get because you learn more and have to improve more to get better.

    well with this i dont know if you've herd but you need to work on the "basics" of animating.
    there are 4 basics to make an animation very good xD

    1. easing,
    think of easing as like a train. is slowly speeds up then it hits full speed then slows down to a stop.
    thats what you do with your joints in an animation xD
    eg:
    | = frame
    - = spacing between the joints

    |-|-|--|---|-----|----|---|--|-|-|-|

    see how it starts small, gets bigger then finishes small xD

    do that with ur joints :P

    2. shakeyness,
    all shakeyness is, its just when you dont ease your joints and they move back and forth so they shake around. if you ease them then its not shakey, but if you dont then it is xD

    3. stiffness,
    stiffness is what alot of people suffer from. all you have to do to get rid of it is, ease and move all joints in every frame. think of it as when you bend over do your legs move? yes they do, every part of you moves every time xD you also got to add flow but you dont need to work on that yet because your still learning ( its one of the more advanced movements to learn :P )


    4. feetplacement,
    well just keep your feet in place every time so they dont slide around or shake. try making a dot ( size 0 thickness 10 ) and place it at the heal of your figures foot so it stays in place xD


    thats what you gotta work on to improve... it takes some time to learn them but you just gotta practice and be patient xD

    low beginner :P


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    Post by PivotLevel120 on 11/09/10, 06:46 pm

    Its Kinda Noob Low beginner but you do your best...XD
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    Post by PajamaEntertainment on 12/09/10, 06:10 am

    no bumping pivotlevel120 /locked


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