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Post by Pureownage11234 on 12/10/10, 01:03 am

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Post by XPivotN00bX on 12/10/10, 02:18 am

Yeah Eruodancer!!!!
Great song!
Anyways back to the running... XD
Use a lot more flow in the arms and feet
The head is moving weirdly so it causes it to be pretty choppy
IMO the legs should not be going as far up as they can cause when you run you don't do the splits in mid air, you you probably just open your legs on a 45 degree angle.... Idk if understand what I mean but basically don't raise the feet that high up.


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Post by Pureownage11234 on 12/10/10, 02:26 am

XPivotN00bX wrote:Yeah Eruodancer!!!!
Great song!
Anyways back to the running... XD
Use a lot more flow in the arms and feet
The head is moving weirdly so it causes it to be pretty choppy
IMO the legs should not be going as far up as they can cause when you run you don't do the splits in mid air, you you probably just open your legs on a 45 degree angle.... Idk if understand what I mean but basically don't raise the feet that high up.
k thx for the cc
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Post by Pureownage11234 on 12/10/10, 02:28 am

Updates!
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Post by XPivotN00bX on 12/10/10, 03:45 am

Its pretty creative with all the moves and how you combined them but you need to work on the basics with this one. Use easing helps probably the most, but still improve foot placement, Choppiness, flow, smoothness, etc.
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Post by PajamaEntertainment on 12/10/10, 04:15 am

i see a lot of improvement :), still low beg though, for cc, well, do what pivotnoob said


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Post by XPivotN00bX on 12/10/10, 06:11 am

Aha nice CC Pajama... :)


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Post by PajamaEntertainment on 12/10/10, 08:29 am

XPivotN00bX wrote:Aha nice CC Pajama... :)
lol well you pretty much covered it all


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