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Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

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Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Pivotnam on 16/11/10, 09:34 am

Shack



Powers:
- Weapons
- Speed
- Stealth
- Research so he knows his challenger

Weaknesses:
- Anything that can kill a human
- After going as fast as he can, he will stand still and recover
- Even if he has stealth, his clothes can only make him invisible for 10 seconds.
- Attacks from below (from underground)

About:
In "Ron Wu" his brother died and he is training to kill the person who killed his brother. Shack is constantly trying to get intel on who is Ron's killer is so far he has nothing but he won't stop.

Demo:



battles won: 0
battles lost:0
points: 0


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Pivotnam on 22/11/10, 08:06 am

sorry to double post but update


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Pureownage11234 on 22/11/10, 09:31 am

Pivotnam wrote:Shack:

He is just an ordinary Joe but in "Ron Wu" his brother died and he is training to kill the person who killed his brother. Shack is constantly trying to get intel on who is Ron's killer is so far he has nothing but he won't stop.

Shack is open to battle anyone so battle him after this date (because it's under construction): 11/25/2010

Skills: weapons, speed, stealth, and research so he knows his challenger.

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Dang. i want to battle with you soon.
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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Pivotnam on 22/11/10, 09:57 am

you don't have to quote the whole thing.

Please challenge me on the weekends.


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by PajamaEntertainment on 28/11/10, 12:20 pm

You MUST follow this outline

(Name)

(Picture of Character)

Powers:
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- (Power 2)
- (Power 3)

Weaknesses:
- (Weakness 1)
- (Weakness 2)
- (Weakness 3)

About:
(Fill in story of your Character)

Demo:

(gif demonstrating your powers)

battles won: 0
battles lost:0
points: 0

Your weaknesses must be appropriate and make sense with your powers
Your powers must not be overpowered/invincible, you need to have some flaws in it.
You do not need 3 powers and weaknesses, that is just the maximum


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Pivotnam on 16/01/11, 12:27 pm

update, i put 1 extra Power but one extra weakness


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by PajamaEntertainment on 17/01/11, 04:46 am

sorry but you can only have 3 powers


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by JusticeThePKMNLover on 18/01/11, 02:41 am

You shouldn't really say but, as that just gives you two ADVANTAGES. Gaining 1 good thing, and losing one bad thing is basically 2 good things. But yeah, and Pajama said its 1 power too many. ._.
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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Niceonegunit on 18/01/11, 06:57 am

Yeah, one power over the top, you can't have over 3, it doesn't matter what situation, that limit can only be officially changed Pajama.


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by sage on 18/01/11, 09:36 am

even though he has four strengths, i think he's balanced.


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Niceonegunit on 18/01/11, 11:59 am

I do too, but rules are rules :/


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by PajamaEntertainment on 18/01/11, 10:54 pm

he is pretty balanced and not really overpowered, but rules are there to be followed and if one person is allowed to break them then everyone will want to break them, so the rule stands, no more then three powers


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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by Thunder on 22/05/11, 09:18 am

Research can be done by anybody. You should delete that power, since it can be done by anyone, and that you can only have 3 powers.
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Re: Ron Wu's brother: Shack - PW Warrior

Post by fr33zty14 on 22/05/11, 09:41 am

Thunder, Please do not *bump* topics
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