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Post by MMJDA on 23/11/10, 08:30 am

Name: Dark Star

Picture: (coming tomorrow)

Powers:
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1. Able to create aura shurikens, to use to his will
(Half Demon Form - long story)
2. Increased strength
3. Healing ability (only activated when severely hurt not mildly)

Weaknesses:
1. Overusage of his half demon form (drains power)
2. Magic (disrupts with his ability to make aura shurikens)
3. Temper (gets the better of him and causes him to make mistakes)

Description: Dark Star is what people called him if they ever saw him his half demon form. His real name is Matt. Matt lived a pretty normal life school full of bullies, he had a crush, has an overprotective mom. But when he turned 16 he started to develop these strange powers. Shurikens just kept popping out of his hands and disappearing again. Anyway that night a demon came to Matt's house and started destroying it to bits. Matt tried to stop him, but the demon was too powerful for him and eventually kills Matt's mom. The demon then targeted Matt and Matt tried to fight back, but the demon beat him to a pulp. But the demon didn't want to kill him he wanted to use Matt's power for his own purposes. So he preformed this ritual where he would take Matt's soul and replace it with part of his almost pike a brainwash except dealing with souls. The demon was half way through (you might be having a gun to your head now but it's almost over) the ritual until, somehow Matt fought back. So now Matt has half of a human soil and half of a demon soul. But suddenly Matt's turns pitch black his eyes glow red, and he basically kicks the demon's (epicly removed). After the fight he collapses, and that's the origin of Dark Star!

Demo: (coming next week)

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Last edited by MMJDA on 11/01/11, 11:53 am; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Making new PWA char)
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Re: MMJDA's Warrior

Post by Niceonegunit on 24/11/10, 07:57 am

Nice imagination, but Dead-On aiming? Have you been playing Red Dead Redemption? >:)

Problem with that is just that he could just shoot EVERY opponent in the head straight away before they entered melee, so it seems kinda unfair, maybe just dumb it down to Epic aiming?


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Post by Choiceinator on 24/11/10, 08:18 am

inoright i agree wit u but he prabrably means that he has really good aiming or sumthin
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Post by Niceonegunit on 24/11/10, 01:48 pm

Yeah, but he said Dead-on or Straight-on aiming, as in, always hits his target.


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Re: MMJDA's Warrior

Post by hazza on 24/11/10, 03:40 pm

maybe he does always hit his target.

but i think like, maybe a better weakness than " anouhter super soldier " cuz what is a " super soldier " ?

have like, magic or something.

still, good character xD






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Post by Choiceinator on 24/11/10, 09:11 pm

no i was talkin to him on skype before cause i actually know him irl
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Post by MMJDA on 27/11/10, 11:15 am

You have to read Marvel to know what a super soldier is -_-

Think of the Incredible Hulk, he was part of a project
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Post by Niceonegunit on 27/11/10, 11:32 am

Yeah, but Hulk isn't really a super 'Soldier'.

More of a Super 'Green plant thing'.


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Post by Choiceinator on 27/11/10, 11:59 am

lol i think a super soilder is a soildier with greater abitlities than the average more strength, speed, agility,
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Re: MMJDA's Warrior

Post by PajamaEntertainment on 28/11/10, 12:23 pm

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Re: MMJDA's Warrior

Post by MMJDA on 10/01/11, 11:46 am

UPDATE
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Re: MMJDA's Warrior

Post by Niceonegunit on 11/01/11, 04:18 am

Well, better than before but now he is a little underpowered :O
He can turn into a Demon yeah, but the Demon drains his power and he has a temper.
Demons are evil, so the temper will be pretty easy to activate if you steal his wallet.
And every attack drains Matt's(Dark star's) power, wow, really? That will make him so easy to beat.


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Re: MMJDA's Warrior

Post by MMJDA on 11/01/11, 05:52 am

Well any ideas?
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Post by Niceonegunit on 11/01/11, 07:07 am

Probably change the Increased agility or Strength, because it's rather useless if the demon doesn't have a special power(no offense, but you do have good ideas.)


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Re: MMJDA's Warrior

Post by MMJDA on 11/01/11, 10:32 am

remember its a half demon so its a little watered down demon plus i might replace agility with a little healing ability which is not cheating because overexposure the dark star form can hurt him plus he's mostly human so he's not that evil. I mean it takes him getting beaten up badly or loss of friend to kinda trigger the form basically things from his heart. Which also leaves another flaw he can't really control his powers. So if you have any ideas keep throwing them at me
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Post by Niceonegunit on 12/01/11, 09:31 am

A Nice detailed Picture of your character, try detailing it, lasers, rain, floor, sun, whatever, it makes your character look like challenge :D


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Post by MMJDA on 12/01/11, 12:04 pm

Hey can i use ur rain thing u used for the ace of spades
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Post by Niceonegunit on 12/01/11, 12:06 pm

Sure :D
I'll PM you :D

Was gonna use the rain for pivart, but then again, the PWA Char pic is really a Pivart(AHA, Pajama made Pivart >:D)


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Post by PajamaEntertainment on 12/01/11, 09:17 pm

(depressed by figuring out i made a pivart, sits in corner sulking for three days)

XD yes technically i did, but i had to, there was no option, i will never make another one again


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Post by MMJDA on 12/01/11, 09:37 pm

What's his deal with Pivart?
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Post by Choiceinator on 12/01/11, 10:46 pm

oh pajama just wants it to die idk why though cause sum are flipin epic 0_0
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Post by MMJDA on 13/01/11, 09:54 pm

Anyway get back on track and can you say something about the warrior (sorry if i sound pushy)
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Post by Niceonegunit on 14/01/11, 10:54 am

Pretty good, but you need a Demo and a Pic, it said that a Picture is coming tomorrow, it's been like that for weeks XD

and the story is kinda weird. a Demon randomly decided to blow up a house for no apparent reason.


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Post by MMJDA on 14/01/11, 09:21 pm

Im making a series on it and bascially you have to keep watching to find out O_O!
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