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Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by Pureownage11234 on 17/01/11, 04:53 am

This is the anim that got me high beg
Finally :) You need the pivot because it doesnt look highbeg because of the loop. http://yourimg.in/j/s5dt8t.piv
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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by sage on 17/01/11, 09:07 am

make a longer animation

and congrats, i guess


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Post by Niceonegunit on 17/01/11, 09:28 am

Good Job!
Though, the aura looks weird, it should cover his whole body, and the loop looks kinda broken.


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by Pureownage11234 on 17/01/11, 09:28 am

Niceonegunit wrote:Good Job!
Though, the aura looks weird, it should cover his whole body, and the loop looks kinda broken.
Thats why you need the piv so it doesnt loop >_>
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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by Niceonegunit on 17/01/11, 10:16 am

Oops, sorry, just looks like it's meant to loop XD


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by Pivotnam on 17/01/11, 10:47 pm

at the end when you eased it was like this:
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so it looks choppy

when he stretches out you moved the whole guy in one frame so it looks shaky

at the last frame you moved legs too far

sorry, i think your med beg


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by JusticeThePKMNLover on 18/01/11, 02:39 am

I'd say that is High-Beg, but it would be better if you made a longer animation. I know I've hit High-Beg a FEW times in my SHORTER animations, but when it comes to my longer animations, I'm back at Med-Beg. Try making a fight scene or something. Other than that, congratulations.
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Post by Choiceinator on 18/01/11, 04:17 am

congrats at hitting high beg but the aura looks kinda weird :P
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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by Niceonegunit on 18/01/11, 06:40 am

Hmmm... Despite the errors, it's a High Beg, but, like Justice said, longer animations are harder than shorter ones. still, you really need to fix the aura, it should cover his whole body, not leave parts of his body out XD


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by XPivotN00bX on 18/01/11, 07:41 am

Yeah I'm sorry too D:
I think you are Border Med Beginner cause its pretty choppy in some spots
By far it is one of your best animations but its not high beginner material yet D:
I don't know where you got high beginner from but this is why I think its not high beginner:

- From looking at your pivot file it shows me that you didn't use easing what so ever with the hands, but you did use it with the feet at one point so I must congratz you on that :D

- Another things is you used too much smoothness meaning it wasn't stiff at all which personally I dislike but others do. this is just my opinion :P

- The floor was kinda off cause it would move down without ease and yes it does it in the looped version but it also does it in the Pivot File

- I felt that he kinda pushed his stomach out a lot but it would have been better if it was eased

- And finally the head is a bit choppy in some area like when it kicks back. Near the end it kinda shakes :P

Some of these are my opinion but my main point is easing. You need to focus a lot on easing cause in my opinion easing and flow are some of the most important things to focus on because combined.... they make magic :D

Great animation but sorry,
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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by PajamaEntertainment on 18/01/11, 10:59 pm

ummm, i was actually the one who originally said it was high beg but the rankings seem to vary so i guess well have to use a poll
maybe ive lost ranking ability due to lack of using pivot in forever


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by XPivotN00bX on 19/01/11, 05:44 am

Actually no... its border Med beginner so you weren't too far off
but thats just my opinion :P
I agree a poll is a great idea


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by sage on 19/01/11, 07:25 am

i don't really think you can rank someone off of a half second long anim, so i'm not going to vote.


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by Pureownage11234 on 19/01/11, 08:03 am

Gawd... -_- I wish pajama told me the right rank D: But mistakes happen
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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by XPivotN00bX on 19/01/11, 08:49 am

I like your attitude :D
just shake it off and you'll be good
On the up side it is your best animation yet :)


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Re: Pure's Thread - I HIT HIGH BEG!

Post by Niceonegunit on 19/01/11, 02:44 pm

Yeah, good going :D
It is your so far best animation, and don't worry, improvment comes in time, patience is key... well, in this case, not always though XD


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