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Post by slasher130 on 22/04/11, 05:45 pm

this is my first loop animation
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Post by R12 on 22/04/11, 09:01 pm

His leg looks like it's moving really fast one moment, but then the next, it stops. Same thing with the arm on the left. The arm on the right seems stiff as well. His back also moves in a strange manner. Other than that, it looks pretty nice for your first loop.


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Post by PajamaEntertainment on 22/04/11, 11:48 pm

R12 pointed out everything, its pretty good though


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Post by XPivotN00bX on 23/04/11, 01:44 am

Upper have is "meh" the lower have is good. I see ease and flow on the bottom half but I suggest that you bring the back legs to the front a little faster (and when I mean that I mean a little faster :P). For the upper half you need to have eased the arms in more. If you going to do that kind of style for the upper half then you need to make the center (the orange dot) ease forward and back and have the legs movement a bit to the back. It should sort of look like a jog. (this is all my opinion though. Feel free not to follow it :D)


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Post by slasher130 on 23/04/11, 02:42 pm

ohhhh. thx guys i think i notice it now..
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