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Better Running. Period
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Better Running. Period
CC Will be great, Especially From PajamaEntertaiment. 11 frame run.
Pureownage11234- Awesome
- Posts : 101
Join date : 2010-09-07
Age : 24
Re: Better Running. Period
oooh nice O_0, it is a LOT better, i like how his back moves up and down
the main problem it has though is that he takes a huge step and then i tiny step, it would look better if you just looped the big step
his arms should also sway one time for each time he takes a step, you had 1 for both steps
i see some stiffness after the part where his front leg is in the air because you didn't really ease into his foot going backed own
the arms stay in the center of his body for a frame too long so it makes it look like his arms stopped there
i also see a bit of choppiness when the back leg starts to go forward
the back arm has a bit of seizure
the back bends well but its not eased when it straightens back out which also made the head stiff when it went back to the original position
anyway, nice job, you have improved
lol i tried to see if i could make some cc as good hazza's, so someone please tell me, is this cc as good as hazza's? i kinda doubt it XD
the main problem it has though is that he takes a huge step and then i tiny step, it would look better if you just looped the big step
his arms should also sway one time for each time he takes a step, you had 1 for both steps
i see some stiffness after the part where his front leg is in the air because you didn't really ease into his foot going backed own
the arms stay in the center of his body for a frame too long so it makes it look like his arms stopped there
i also see a bit of choppiness when the back leg starts to go forward
the back arm has a bit of seizure
the back bends well but its not eased when it straightens back out which also made the head stiff when it went back to the original position
anyway, nice job, you have improved
lol i tried to see if i could make some cc as good hazza's, so someone please tell me, is this cc as good as hazza's? i kinda doubt it XD
PajamaEntertainment- Admin
- Posts : 1403
Join date : 2010-05-08
Age : 29
Location : Narnia
Re: Better Running. Period
Lol at the seizure part :PPajamaEntertainment wrote:oooh nice O_0, it is a LOT better, i like how his back moves up and down
the main problem it has though is that he takes a huge step and then i tiny step, it would look better if you just looped the big step
his arms should also sway one time for each time he takes a step, you had 1 for both steps
i see some stiffness after the part where his front leg is in the air because you didn't really ease into his foot going backed own
the arms stay in the center of his body for a frame too long so it makes it look like his arms stopped there
i also see a bit of choppiness when the back leg starts to go forward
the back arm has a bit of seizure
the back bends well but its not eased when it straightens back out which also made the head stiff when it went back to the original position
anyway, nice job, you have improved
lol i tried to see if i could make some cc as good hazza's, so someone please tell me, is this cc as good as hazza's? i kinda doubt it XD
Pureownage11234- Awesome
- Posts : 101
Join date : 2010-09-07
Age : 24
Re: Better Running. Period
hahaha using seizure as a description is very common in my cc XD
PajamaEntertainment- Admin
- Posts : 1403
Join date : 2010-05-08
Age : 29
Location : Narnia
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