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Post by Pureownage11234 17/10/10, 01:34 am

CC Will be great, Especially From PajamaEntertaiment. 11 frame run.
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Post by PajamaEntertainment 17/10/10, 01:53 am

oooh nice O_0, it is a LOT better, i like how his back moves up and down

the main problem it has though is that he takes a huge step and then i tiny step, it would look better if you just looped the big step

his arms should also sway one time for each time he takes a step, you had 1 for both steps

i see some stiffness after the part where his front leg is in the air because you didn't really ease into his foot going backed own

the arms stay in the center of his body for a frame too long so it makes it look like his arms stopped there

i also see a bit of choppiness when the back leg starts to go forward

the back arm has a bit of seizure

the back bends well but its not eased when it straightens back out which also made the head stiff when it went back to the original position

anyway, nice job, you have improved
lol i tried to see if i could make some cc as good hazza's, so someone please tell me, is this cc as good as hazza's? i kinda doubt it XD
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Post by Pureownage11234 17/10/10, 01:54 am

PajamaEntertainment wrote:oooh nice O_0, it is a LOT better, i like how his back moves up and down

the main problem it has though is that he takes a huge step and then i tiny step, it would look better if you just looped the big step

his arms should also sway one time for each time he takes a step, you had 1 for both steps

i see some stiffness after the part where his front leg is in the air because you didn't really ease into his foot going backed own

the arms stay in the center of his body for a frame too long so it makes it look like his arms stopped there

i also see a bit of choppiness when the back leg starts to go forward

the back arm has a bit of seizure

the back bends well but its not eased when it straightens back out which also made the head stiff when it went back to the original position

anyway, nice job, you have improved
lol i tried to see if i could make some cc as good hazza's, so someone please tell me, is this cc as good as hazza's? i kinda doubt it XD
Lol at the seizure part :P
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Post by PajamaEntertainment 17/10/10, 02:05 am

hahaha using seizure as a description is very common in my cc XD
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