My New Series?

I am doing a series at the moment I just haven't posted on here yet and I want CC. Some people from this forum know what I am doing because of another forum that will remain nameless due to advertising.

Storyline I made up on the other forum:
The series is called Dark Star. Dark Star is actually an alter ego who goes crazy when he's in it. Though it is very strong it deteriorates your body every time you use it. But he can't control it so yeah he's pretty much good as dead. So this "unnamed" character tries to live a normal life, but when he gets enraged things go south and he becomes Dark Star. His weapons are these aura or plasma well I don't know some kind of shurikens (I think thats how you spell it) that he could just throw at his will at people in normal form or Dark Star form. He's about between the age gap of 14-16, not sure yet. Well that's all I got for now gimme a suggestion about some things I should include or take out. Plus I know if this sounds a little bit like Naruto, it's because yeah I know the thing is a little bit based on that.

Oldest to Newest Anims on it:
Glimpse of Dark Star
http://imageflock.com/img/1288267795.gif

Episode 1
http://imageflock.com/img/1288405734.gif

Opening - Just made
http://imageflock.com/img/1289359512.gif

Any tutorials you want to send me to help me get better at stiffness, easing, or just a fight please send them

but it's a dragonball episode???????

No it's not he's only using dragon ball stks the series has nothin to do with dragon ball lol

I Can actually make a opening for you or some stks.... :D Anyway episde one is weird and stiff O.o What fps you use?

I used around 10 now im using 12 - 13 if you could give me any help just send me a link

Could you PM me the Dark star stk, i bet I could make a good Intro to use in some episodes :D

the darkstar is a dragonballz stickof gogeta ssj2 if u wanna find it go to drodz and type dbz full pack and u might find it there

Well choice all i did was delete the drawstring in the front, so ill send him a link:
http://yourimg.in/f/4cji28.stk
But I might make my own so I don't face copyright issues and get banned

oh but u should make ur own stick but im so use to the epic gogeta stick >_<