my best animation

dramatic animation angles in the beginning :D

umm...

It could use alot more easing and smoothness. The cameram movements were too jumpy. And not much at all happens.

Ug, you're a helper. Post comments that help.

the jump needs major improvement. he nearly stops in midair. and as rock said, the ground is very shaky. smooth it out. the head is also shaky.

i see what you were trying to do with the fround in fact i love it when ppl do that with the ground but you need to work on it, it was really rough also the jump didnt look very realistic

Ok. First problem. He stops in midair while he jumps. XD Second, the camera shaking was a little too jumpy and a little too quick moving. You can solve that just by easing with the shaking. Third, when he is about to land, his head shakes like a headbanger or something. Try to make it less shaky. It looks wierd. No offence. I used to do it too. XD But you still are improving very much! :D
Try to work on foot placement too because when he took his first step in the animation, it slid a little. XD
Try to watch my foot placement tutorial in the... Trash discussion section. -.-
Same thing for my easing tutorial because you could work on easing just a little more. Once again, it is in the trash section. :(

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I like doing those dramatic scenes where the camera moves with the person in the middle, I tried but got too lazy XD and when he jumped I think I eased too much.

300ilikepie wrote:I like doing those dramatic scenes where the camera moves with the person in the middle

what you're talking about is called center of origin.

I think you slowed him down to much mid-air.But nice camera angleing.