FIRST DBZ PIVOT!

Omg my best DBZ Pivot and my first!! ok well here it is! Okay :D but the sound effects were hard to find to!!

ok work on all the basics also there were too many cinematic parts cinematic parts are great but dbz fights are supposed to be fast paced so you need to have more fighting the best thing to do would be to have fighting cinematic parts

PajamaEntertainment wrote:ok work on all the basics also there were too many cinematic parts cinematic parts are great but dbz fights are supposed to be fast paced so you need to have more fighting the best thing to do would be to have fighting cinematic parts

OKAY BUT. This is my first one and i don't know much about the "DBZ Movements" Because i cant make it fast

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:ok work on all the basics also there were too many cinematic parts cinematic parts are great but dbz fights are supposed to be fast paced so you need to have more fighting the best thing to do would be to have fighting cinematic parts

OKAY BUT. This is my first one and i don't know much about the "DBZ Movements" Because i cant make it fast

dude why do you act like everytime i post im insulting you im not im just giving you constructive criticism

PajamaEntertainment wrote:

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:ok work on all the basics also there were too many cinematic parts cinematic parts are great but dbz fights are supposed to be fast paced so you need to have more fighting the best thing to do would be to have fighting cinematic parts

OKAY BUT. This is my first one and i don't know much about the "DBZ Movements" Because i cant make it fast

dude why do you act like everytime i post im insulting you im not im just giving you constructive criticism

Because atleast at other pivot sites they dont give me ****** they atleast say "Great Job, but it needs work" Everything else feels insulting because it makes me pivot even worse People saying Great Job inspires me.

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:ok work on all the basics also there were too many cinematic parts cinematic parts are great but dbz fights are supposed to be fast paced so you need to have more fighting the best thing to do would be to have fighting cinematic parts

OKAY BUT. This is my first one and i don't know much about the "DBZ Movements" Because i cant make it fast

dude why do you act like everytime i post im insulting you im not im just giving you constructive criticism

Because atleast at other pivot sites they dont give me ****** they atleast say "Great Job, but it needs work" Everything else feels insulting because it makes me pivot even worse People saying Great Job inspires me.

Really good if you keep practicing you will get really good but i suggest listening to pajama hes giving you great cc thats how i improve

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:ok work on all the basics also there were too many cinematic parts cinematic parts are great but dbz fights are supposed to be fast paced so you need to have more fighting the best thing to do would be to have fighting cinematic parts

OKAY BUT. This is my first one and i don't know much about the "DBZ Movements" Because i cant make it fast

dude why do you act like everytime i post im insulting you im not im just giving you constructive criticism

Because atleast at other pivot sites they dont give me ****** they atleast say "Great Job, but it needs work" Everything else feels insulting because it makes me pivot even worse People saying Great Job inspires me.

seriously dude if i was low beg i would say great job but im not ive pointed out what i like about your anims but im not gonna say great job if i dont think its a great job i like to be honest and how do you expect to get anywhere if you get so mad if someone doesnt like your vids dude seriously just learn how to handle things if you start anymore arguments i will be forced to lower your warning level thank you for the support choice

PajamaEntertainment wrote:

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:

Pureownage11234 wrote:

PajamaEntertainment wrote:ok work on all the basics also there were too many cinematic parts cinematic parts are great but dbz fights are supposed to be fast paced so you need to have more fighting the best thing to do would be to have fighting cinematic parts

OKAY BUT. This is my first one and i don't know much about the "DBZ Movements" Because i cant make it fast

dude why do you act like everytime i post im insulting you im not im just giving you constructive criticism

Because atleast at other pivot sites they dont give me ****** they atleast say "Great Job, but it needs work" Everything else feels insulting because it makes me pivot even worse People saying Great Job inspires me.

seriously dude if i was low beg i would say great job but im not ive pointed out what i like about your anims but im not gonna say great job if i dont think its a great job i like to be honest and how do you expect to get anywhere if you get so mad if someone doesnt like your vids dude seriously just learn how to handle things if you start anymore arguments i will be forced to lower your warning level thank you for the support choice

Okay well thank you for not inspiring me i wont post pivots anymore if you think they're ******

wow dude really -_- you are extremely immature i never said that youre stuff was **** i said they werent great thats a huge difference youre anims are good for a begginer especially since you use cinematics but grow up dude

Pureownage I can understand what you mean... When you get a great job you feel good so you want to continue. Am I correct? Now what Pajama means is he doesn't just give great jobs out like they are gifts. you need to earn it. Thats what inpsires me. When someone gives me CC and doesn't say anything like great job or Good work I think... hmmmm maybe I need to work hard so that someone can recognize my potential and I can "earn" a great job. I think I am the opposite of you pureownage Haha. I will always want people to get straight to the point and give me long and descriptive CC and when people say good job I feel good about myself but I don't really benifit. If you feel that your work is great than you deserve a pat on the back because thats really what counts, but don't get upset when someone doesn't give a great job or w.e cause sometimes people forget and sometimes people like me don't think it matters. With that being said I see that you would appreciate a good job so.... Good job pureownage.

Now for my CC.
Work on not having your character fig-it cause when he does it becomes very choppy. Before he has a close up on his hands to ki blast he fig-its. Try to fix it by keeping the character going in same direction and not moving a joint side to side.
Work on Easing ( |||-|--|---|----|----|---|--|-|||)
Work on feet Placement. Basically everything in this is kinda sketchy.
I like your creativity but as Pajama said. Less cinematics. If you want cinematics get into non-DBZ fighting. I would work on basics before doing another DBZ video. Try and looking up these key words and put your tests/practises on the forum:

Smoothness
Flow
Easing
Feet placement
Choppyness
Running tutorial
Walking tutorial
Punching tutorial
Kicking tutorial

Once you perfect all of that you can reach interz :)
Can't wait to see your work in the months to come.

Dude, chill, Pajama is just telling what you need to improve, it's not an insult.


And like Pajama said, too cinematic, try making it more fighting, doesn't really need to be too fast, but add more fighting, and it'll be good.


Now for some more CC.
First of all, it wasn't that eased.
I also noticed when he flew away, he was very shaky.