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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 31/01/11, 12:43 am

Update: Double Punch. Dun tell me about stiff legs, I was focusing on the arms. :l

P.S: Soz for Dobleh Post
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Post by Pivotnam 31/01/11, 02:21 am

THAT'S EPIC!! the top half of the body is interz
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 31/01/11, 02:22 am

Srs? O: LOL!
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Post by Pivotnam 31/01/11, 02:24 am

no i'm just joking sorry :(
Spoiler:
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 31/01/11, 02:27 am

>_> Owell, I bet you my next anim is once again MEd Beg

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Post by Pivotnam 31/01/11, 02:36 am

look at the spoiler (if you haven't)
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 31/01/11, 02:49 am

I did. LOLOL

Edit: Update!

High Beg Yet? If that ain't High-Beg please tell me its at least border to high. D:
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 31/01/11, 09:39 pm

Just so you know, if I've posted the Pivot file for an animation, its because its either slow, or I want you to see the Pivot file. I highly recommend downloading them, as they look better on Pivot 3, and look really slow on ImageFlock,
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Post by XPivotN00bX 01/02/11, 01:06 am

Oh sorry...
Yeah your high beginner already...
My bad >.>
Ummm still not borderz though D: sadly
you are really close but just not there yet. I took the pivot file of the animation and the only problem distinguishing you from border interz and beginner is the fact that some joints weren't eased D:
So close!!!! This is too suspenseful. Make one animation and please, please take your time on it. Make sure you give yourself CC then fix the mistakes that you don't like.
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 01/02/11, 01:10 am

YESH! I IZ DETERMINED TO GET BORDERLINE, AND IF I DUN, I'LL DAI TRYEN! Ty.
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 01/02/11, 01:47 am

Update: I did say I'll die trying... And I died. D: Took me like a hour and a half to make this.
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Post by sage 01/02/11, 07:19 am

the foot placement appears to be off
the last part is pretty slow
there's a bit of stiffness in the back and legs
the head's a bit choppy
the leg looks weird when he takes the first step
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Post by -McToast- 01/02/11, 02:00 pm

Still med beg. Feet placement is still off, and it's oe of the easiest things to master, so don't think you get hb easily :/ Also you need to change the stop and go style, it doesn't look natural :S Nice job, but not high beg yet.
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Post by XPivotN00bX 02/02/11, 01:30 am

My bad then >.> I guess I was wrong >.>
I apologize Justice for getting your hopes up D:
But the fact that I think that you are high beginner should be enough to know that your improving :D
I agree with sage and McToast and I did notice these small things but I still like your style of animating and I find it creative, something that I have a lot of trouble doing >.<
Good luck with High beg :D
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 05/02/11, 06:11 am

Opdate.
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Post by Niceonegunit 06/02/11, 08:43 am

Pretty nice, I hate it when animations end up half a second when you'd worked on it for hours XD
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 12/02/11, 06:02 pm

Update.
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Post by sage 14/02/11, 02:38 pm

the head and back are a bit stiff, and the legs could use more easing.

keep trying, you're almost there!
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 19/02/11, 01:04 am

I have made an abnormally stupid animation. It's made to be played at 33FPS. Thats right. 33. The highest Frame Rate Pivot allows. Yet, it still looks natural at 33FPS. :P
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Post by PajamaEntertainment 19/02/11, 04:22 am

theres really no point in animating at 33 fps since the framerate used in actual cartoons and cameras is 30 fps, plus at that high of a framerate human eyes cant really tel the difference (some other animals can but im pretty sure youre intended audience is humans XD), the anim was pretty good but i could tell it was difficult for you to animate at that high of a framerate, i would suggest that you lower it to an fps youre more comfortable with
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 19/02/11, 04:37 am

Not really hard to animate at that high a fps actually. I just made my spacing really small. >_>
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Post by PajamaEntertainment 19/02/11, 06:11 am

actually its subtly shaking the entire time which doesnt usually happen in your anims, which means (even if you didnt norice it) it is harder for you to animate at that high a framerate, and even if it was easy then you should still lower the framerate by 3 because that extra 3 is pointless since no one will notice it and it will only be a burden if you ever go into professional animation
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Post by JusticeThePKMNLover 22/03/11, 03:32 am

Opdate.
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